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Those brown eyes make me angry
      Maybe because they’re cold
             Maybe because they’re dead
Those brown eyes make me angry
I would prefer the lies instead

Those lips make me remember
       Maybe because they’re silent
              Maybe because they’re still
Those lips make me remember
I would prefer them popping pills

That mouth makes me shiver
        Maybe because it’s smiling
              Maybe because it’s bleeding
That mouth makes me shiver
I would prefer the annoying pleading

That neck makes me sick
       Maybe because it’s purple
            Maybe because it’s green
That neck makes me sick
I would prefer the words so mean

Those wrists make me wonder
         Maybe because they’re torn
             Maybe because they’re scarred
Those wrists make me wonder
I would prefer she tried less hard

Those hands make me regret
       Maybe because they’re calling
            Maybe because they’re reaching
Those hands make me regret
I would prefer I did less preaching

That body makes me wish
       Maybe because it’s broken
               Maybe because it’s dead
That body makes me wish
I had my daughter back instead
©2005-2009 ~crYingAngel868
:iconcryingangel868:

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this is a poem written from a mother's point of view. A mother whose daughter has been found in a horrible state and she is wishing that she had her back. No matter how much of a 'problem child' she may have been, she realizes maybe she pushed her too hard and would rather have anything, but this as her reality right now.

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Er.

Im crieing.

that poem hit way too close to home.

:heart:
krys

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Do you know that place in between sleeping and awake? That place where you are still in dreaming? That is where I love you. That is where I will be waiting for you.
:iconcryingangel868:
Sorry....I thought it might. I wasn't going to put it up, actually at first I thought I was on the other one. eep

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u think ive changed - but in reality`-> i just started to be myself...so u can take me as I am or....watch me as I go
:iconmasea:
=( i'm crying too

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"Nothing can happen till you swing the bat."

"It takes an idiot to do cool things. That's why it's cool."
:iconcryingangel868:
:happycry: we're ballin like babies!! thankyou


:ahoy: <--he's cute he's cute

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u think ive changed - but in reality`-> i just started to be myself...so u can take me as I am or....watch me as I go
:iconraecen:
i didnt cry, but i really felt this one!!
its just full of the feel of grief and regret
its so beautiful
:iconcryingangel868:
thankyou so much :heart:

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My biggest fear?
...is that one day all those whom I love, will disappear :rose:

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